So far so good, but it's only 2 chapters, so not much to say. I would suggest to use ' ' for thoughts rather than **, it looks more readable.
Dark_Vader98
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dang man why you reading stuff with only 2 chaps??
Lol, I know the feeling, sometimes though you cannot resist doing it every now and than.
ThanatosGreekGod:dang man why you reading stuff with only 2 chaps??