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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv132yr
2022-12-20 09:27

It’s pretty good, not as good as some of the novels you decided to drop but whatever I guess 🙄 My only complaint is your blatant promotion of your political views through this novel. It just comes across as weird, and unnecessary. If it was just a one time thing, I’d ignore it, but you spend a whole chapter pushing it… like, are you ok?

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Pedro_Marques_3020
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26 Chs

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Phenix_Rox
Phenix_RoxLv14

Divine Emperor of Death Great novel. In start it's like a silly novel because I think its author's first novel. But after 300, story build up well. After 1200+, story will get better, and it led readers to curious about what happen next. Some misunderstanding happens (like you will get wrong ideas for some scenarios) if you read around 300 or little less chapters because you will think it's just an OP or something not right to read because it's silly novel. But just trust and read at least 1500+ chapters and you will find those early worries not necessary and lot of OP(like death note) will come up with lot of restrictions. (Those are figured in novel by MC) Novel gets very interesting and now its lot more with cliffhangers (I'm at 2513). Also, author discount (99%) 3rd tire privileged chapter for just for 90 coins. For unlock 3rd tire 90 coin, each chapter also 1 coin (99% discount) Include 6 chapters for that tire. Also join his discord channel there you can clarify about your doubts about some chapters, if you feel novel will get wrong direction or not right in your sense. because author like to mislead readers (like teasing) and write entirely different stories. Also, author like to hang the reader's lot of cliffhangers. So, if you think it's not right to read story because you think it wrong like something happen, then you can ask it on discord spoiler channel and clarify what will happen next by fellow readers and continue to read.

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N_Nelson
N_NelsonLv4

As always ur fics are too good, u have a very creative mind but I think that's also ur weakness cuz u never dedicate or finish any of ur other fics, I always hoped u did but u never did

2yr

carrotpie
carrotpieLv5

While I understand that the character can only ally with China in the novel it really just seems like a excuse the author is using. Pretty much the mc is pro communism and pro China. They go on spouting about how China has “helped” there country so much and how capitalism is bad . With most of the stuff that is said it’s very clear that there ignoring all the bad parts and finding the bits and pieces that seem good and are saying there bigger than they are .

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JunRaya
JunRayaLv4

FF is decent, Concept of One piece Powers in Naruto is new for me so it's quite refreshing. I do recommend reading it yourself and see if you like it. The only problem I have is that it might get dropped at chapter 20-40s like any other interesting ffs because it already has that vibe in it.

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nalhakim
nalhakimLv5

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_JuneDays_oz
_JuneDays_ozLv14

The novel has a lot of political charged ideas, so some people might not like it, personally I don’t really for the politics, nonetheless interesting novel. The Main Character is to much of an idealist, and he seems to never pick the wrong choice, but it not like he’s an omnipotent god, he’s a human with superhuman powers. Can’t speak on update schedule as I read the first 20-ish chapter that were already out. Story development is a given it a fanfic there essentially a road for it. World background i a given it a fan fic. *Author really hates the US I can’t really tell why, but he should know that he’s adapting an American tv show/comic while is MC is using power from an another American franchise.

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Zoodd
ZooddLv1

Essa história poderia ter sido muito melhor infelizmente isso é so um meio do autor propagar suas ideias políticas dizendo basicamente : Capitalismo = ruim, Comunismo = bom, alem do protagonista querer pagar de moralista ignorando completamente qualquer consequência que essa ideologia gera para o povo daquele país

1yr
DaoistZofHeaven
DaoistZofHeavenLv13

I knew I wasn’t crazy. The original book is called The Golden Guardian by Solomon1984 on fanfiction.net someone else posted 4 chapter here with the same title but at least they gave credit

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Gunts92
Gunts92Lv10

mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles

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Slowturtle
SlowturtleLv12

ok I'll let you know, if you have problems with the novels "china numba own" you will have problems here, like an overdose, the funny part is that it was because of these chinese super propaganda novels that i stopped reading urban genre novel, the strange part is that the author is brazilian (same nationality as me), and most Brazilians suffered from the strong hand of the state, we had two dictatorships (one of them many do not consider "the Vargas" a dictatorship). we have suffered because of left and right. In addition to the dictatorships, we had savings being kidnapped by a president and a huge corruption scandal.

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