As always ur fics are too good, u have a very creative mind but I think that's also ur weakness cuz u never dedicate or finish any of ur other fics, I always hoped u did but u never did

While I understand that the character can only ally with China in the novel it really just seems like a excuse the author is using. Pretty much the mc is pro communism and pro China. They go on spouting about how China has “helped” there country so much and how capitalism is bad . With most of the stuff that is said it’s very clear that there ignoring all the bad parts and finding the bits and pieces that seem good and are saying there bigger than they are .

It’s pretty good, not as good as some of the novels you decided to drop but whatever I guess 🙄 My only complaint is your blatant promotion of your political views through this novel. It just comes across as weird, and unnecessary. If it was just a one time thing, I’d ignore it, but you spend a whole chapter pushing it… like, are you ok?

FF is decent, Concept of One piece Powers in Naruto is new for me so it's quite refreshing. I do recommend reading it yourself and see if you like it. The only problem I have is that it might get dropped at chapter 20-40s like any other interesting ffs because it already has that vibe in it.

The novel has a lot of political charged ideas, so some people might not like it, personally I don’t really for the politics, nonetheless interesting novel. The Main Character is to much of an idealist, and he seems to never pick the wrong choice, but it not like he’s an omnipotent god, he’s a human with superhuman powers. Can’t speak on update schedule as I read the first 20-ish chapter that were already out. Story development is a given it a fanfic there essentially a road for it. World background i a given it a fan fic. *Author really hates the US I can’t really tell why, but he should know that he’s adapting an American tv show/comic while is MC is using power from an another American franchise.

Essa história poderia ter sido muito melhor infelizmente isso é so um meio do autor propagar suas ideias políticas dizendo basicamente : Capitalismo = ruim, Comunismo = bom, alem do protagonista querer pagar de moralista ignorando completamente qualquer consequência que essa ideologia gera para o povo daquele país

I knew I wasn’t crazy. The original book is called The Golden Guardian by Solomon1984 on fanfiction.net someone else posted 4 chapter here with the same title but at least they gave credit

mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles mtl pro chinois capitaliste.... ne vaut pas une etoiles

ok I'll let you know, if you have problems with the novels "china numba own" you will have problems here, like an overdose, the funny part is that it was because of these chinese super propaganda novels that i stopped reading urban genre novel, the strange part is that the author is brazilian (same nationality as me), and most Brazilians suffered from the strong hand of the state, we had two dictatorships (one of them many do not consider "the Vargas" a dictatorship). we have suffered because of left and right. In addition to the dictatorships, we had savings being kidnapped by a president and a huge corruption scandal.