Virtual_FantasyLv132yr

2022-04-16 19:29

Writing quality: Well, since I use a translator to translate into my mother tongue, I wouldn't know how to give you a rating, but I suppose it's okay, since you're quite descriptive, in fights you're ok, you know how to put a construction and continuity in fights, I highlight The fight against Enigma, which is quite decent, I put 4 stars because I cannot give an exact judgment due to the fact that I read the fanfic in translator, that's why I give a star for the margin of error. Stability of Updates: It's pretty good, a daily chapter, the only thing I miss would be to put Chapter Packs like 5 chapters in a day or something like that, but outside of that the chapter cadence is pretty good, a 5 stars in this department. Story Development: This is quite good, the beginning of the plot as Born and grows seems tremendous to me, that they give us their motivations in the first chapters is quite good, although they are lost and are not clear in some stories. What I like most about this work is how the MC acts with the world and its members, how it is a motivation for Mihawk, a help for Katakuri and Kuzan, A rival for Kaido, a Kouhai for Whitebeard and Shaky, Each one of these relationships are understood and created in a good way and do not clash at any time. Also take a risk by making history in the time of Roger and Rocks, but use this risk is used to enrich this empty part of history by setting the Overlords that are goals and that have to be reached. Although there are Power ups that could be categorized as cliches and it gains part of its power with the system, when there are important advances it is noticeable that it is due to effort and time, the author does not tremble to prepare his MC with time skips and training , although if he has some other power or cliche but in general terms it is fine, for now the main character knows where he is and where he is going, he does not get stuck in the Rocks crew, he goes to the future, and that is very good, There are some gaps such as the fact that Enigma did not use Lilin to stop the MC, since she was owing him the Gigantization Serum, and at that moment Enigma would have told him that the favor was paid if he helped him stop Damian and Kaido. Character Design: this is one of the parts that I like the most about this work, as it adapts characters that have not come out almost like Rocks or OC characters like Enigma, They cause an impression and respect as the one that Rocks should give, he feels like the leader of a crew like the Rocks and Enigma feel the same way, command respect and behave like the person they are supposed to be, a powerful Overlord who has held his position for many years. About the MC, the character is constantly evolving, he does not stay stagnant and thinks about the future, when he does not correct his mistakes the world does, but he realizes his mistakes and tries to correct them, as when Rocks explained that not all can enter the crew, he was naive and realized and corrected it, The goals are from the first chapters since the author instead of making a first arc that focuses only on the evolution of power of the MC, made a arch that also raises and gives us to show the character of the MC. World Background: The creation of the world is very good, this is made based on the time of Roger and Rocks, a time already seen but little described in the manga and anime, he takes advantage of these gaps to enrich the world by his own hand, putting characters, Islands and settings of his own authorship, which do not seem out of tune with the world of One Piece, although there are some times that he conveniently uses that freedom to drive his characters, such as the supposed island of Death, but they are minor details. When these scenarios created by the author are where an important plot happens, they are endowed with a good description to the point where we can imagine the place with the same animation of the anime

One piece : path to power

DaoOfEternity

4.4

85 Chs