I like the story so far, initially the writing was a bit awkward maybe because it's in a first person perspective which can be difficult to write... However as the story progresses it gets noticeably better. within the first five chapters there is an idea of the power scaling and how things work in the world. Not much details about the system yet but I hope to learn more as the book progresses. Very interested in seeing how the initial misunderstanding is cleared and how the MC will get his revenge.
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