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_inzie1yrPostedI like the story so far, initially the writing was a bit awkward maybe because it's in a first person perspective which can be difficult to write... However as the story progresses it gets noticeably better. within the first five chapters there is an idea of the power scaling and how things work in the world. Not much details about the system yet but I hope to learn more as the book progresses. Very interested in seeing how the initial misunderstanding is cleared and how the MC will get his revenge.
- _inzie2yrCommentedCh 4 1-A
- _inzie2yrCommented[The only sugar that I need in the morning is you~ A date with my baobei*, isn't he the cutest? I feed him so he'll stay cute like that. In exchange, he feeds me his delicious milk! ~(>.<)~]
- _inzie2yrCommentedCh 1 Why Do Girls Like Bad Boys So Much!?
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pffft straight... mhmm
And so, that was the beginning of his otome mastery as a self-proclaimed 'straight' guy. - _inzie2yrCommented
.... 🤔... she kinda has a point... I guess
"With otome games, you don't aim for a sweet, romantic story. You could have just read a cheesy shoujo novel if that's what you like! No, you're after the endless possibilities of the alternate endings. The torture and despair are doubled compared to normal tragic novels too, because you put yourself as the character and receive the consequences of your own actions! It's so cool and thrilling that it lasts in your mind forever!" - _inzie2yrCommented
My naming sense is atrocious!
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She started to type, "Zaike, I'm sorry!!!". But she paused, she didn't feel it right to apologize to him virtually right away like that. Deleting the text she wrote again, "Hey there!! Please reply to me Zaike… please do reply to me soon… I can't bear this feeling anymore… I'm too full of stuff I've spoken already… Please reply to me Zaike… I want to see your eyes…feel the warmth… let us not be like this Zaike…I can't bear this pain anymore…" she paused. "I miss you already!!" she completed texting as her eyes wandered to check once again. - _inzie2yrCommented
This is an interesting story in the sense that the character was reincarnated in an alternate reality with nice parents... But that makes me wonder, what will the MC be doing? There is no revenge to take? There aren't much changes to make considering that the reality is different itself. I have no idea how this will progress but I'm curious to see so I'll add to my library and wait for an update. Thank you for the chapter!!
Ch 3 Long Road To School - _inzie2yrCommented
lol how do you know how the BigBang sounded?... were you there?? sus
As I skimmed through the poem, it gave me an ecstatic feeling of attraction towards it. Wherein, I slowly and slowly reached the palm of my hand towards it, and then held the stone's shining light. And once my palm finally touched the stone. It shrieked an incredible sound like the big bang when the universe was created. - _inzie2yrCommentedCh 10 Chapter X - Promotion Quest 1
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I think you should get that checked 👀🤣
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Sure he will 👀
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I started reading this on an empty stomach and my brain went 'big words'... So I paused after the first chapter, gathered my slumbering braincells then continued. The writing style perfectly matches the futuristic setting, but even more than that, it brought to light the personality of the MC. Distinguished gentleman? Nope !!🤣 As the story progresses you'll realize that he's just someone who pays attention to details, maybe even a little too much. But that's what makes him so hilarious. To describe a person being impaled as if it were fine art. Almost as if, it was something he saw daily. All while shamelessly making a tactical retreat. 🤣👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Brilliant! Excellent writing! Very interested in seeing where this story is headed.