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Predaotr
PredaotrLv53mth
2024-11-06 01:19

it was starting good, but with each chapter quality drops - currently at the point where Lockhart teaches at hogwarts and for some reason he tries to portray himself as close to original as possible - even tho there was really no need for it to be - its basically copy paste of original with minimal changes. Not to mention authot notes at the start and end of chapter are becoming longer and longer - they are like 30% of chapter's length at this point

The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)

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4.2
125 Chs

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