Predaotr

its literally written that it disrupted his intangibility - so yeah it's bs

what happened to them not meeting kalifa yet?

wtf? she had no clima tact at this point of time

wtf is this mission reward they talk about? are you really forcing readers of this fic to read the other one?

im pretty sure there was segment saying saeko can contact her father after phones were introduced

why even ask this anymore if their room have its own hot spring pool?

why even include those if you won't write about it here but one needs to read other book to get it?

Randomly making alex even more arrogant than normally so that you can kill one of his pokemon? like wtf? you made his character be cautious but arrogant and yet here you completely got rid of his cautious nature and just made him stand here for no reason and wait till they burn life force

why tf show this whole list when nothing changed since it was shown last?

really ? its literally in name "experience"