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primordialzero
primordialzeroLv22yr
2022-06-20 00:13

The MC is very naive, it doesn't seem like he's done bad things in his past life and that already damages the foundation of the fic because the authors are like that, they start well but most start to put stupid things that damage the fic in the tags, he says system but he system where is it?

My life after being given a second chance.

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63 Chs

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GoldBySilver
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Too much grammatical errors, plot barely makes sense, mc character is inconsistent. Ignore the bot reviews. If you want to read something good then do not waste your time here.

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LunaKindred
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Just like another tier 3 harem fics, the plot is cliche and the mc development is so stupid. You make his past is yakuza but you write it like 16 yo boy with hero syndrome, his alignment should be neutral, why you make him like beta mc, it should be black-white mc...

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i want to continue but i can't. I 'm losing my brain 🧠 cells reading this fic. .................................................................

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Author writes a "cruel" past for the main character, then when the story begins, everything loses meaning. The main character acts, thinks and talks like a 9-year-old brat with a stupid hero complex. MC is beta, simp, cuckold man.

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Pacifist_Warrior
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~Ahem you got me author first by dxd pic on cover now...... ...Kaede .....Lexia.....Celial.....Shuri ...'cough' Akeno 'cough' no I'm talking about mature version (no pedo) I have high hopes for you author in this novel (waiting for segs 'cough')~

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akasuna123
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main character lies for no reason. . ..... ... . ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...... ........... .. ... ..... . ..... .. .... ..... ... ....

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_MICHAEL_SAINT
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i m sure the author is a 13 yr old high on hormones and caffeine and wrote this while smoking weed and jerking off cuz this is a abomination mate

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