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assad1830
assad1830Lv62yr
2022-05-19 21:47

i want to continue but i can't. I 'm losing my brain 🧠 cells reading this fic. .................................................................

My life after being given a second chance.

Kamsurik_980
2.8
63 Chs

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GoldBySilver
GoldBySilverLv1

Too much grammatical errors, plot barely makes sense, mc character is inconsistent. Ignore the bot reviews. If you want to read something good then do not waste your time here.

2yr

LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

Just like another tier 3 harem fics, the plot is cliche and the mc development is so stupid. You make his past is yakuza but you write it like 16 yo boy with hero syndrome, his alignment should be neutral, why you make him like beta mc, it should be black-white mc...

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Author writes a "cruel" past for the main character, then when the story begins, everything loses meaning. The main character acts, thinks and talks like a 9-year-old brat with a stupid hero complex. MC is beta, simp, cuckold man.

2yr
Pacifist_Warrior
Pacifist_WarriorLv4

~Ahem you got me author first by dxd pic on cover now...... ...Kaede .....Lexia.....Celial.....Shuri ...'cough' Akeno 'cough' no I'm talking about mature version (no pedo) I have high hopes for you author in this novel (waiting for segs 'cough')~

2yr
akasuna123
akasuna123Lv5

main character lies for no reason. . ..... ... . ..... .... ..... ..... .... ...... ........... .. ... ..... . ..... .. .... ..... ... ....

2yr
IamKingOfFreedom
IamKingOfFreedomLv1

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2yr
_MICHAEL_SAINT
_MICHAEL_SAINTLv4

i m sure the author is a 13 yr old high on hormones and caffeine and wrote this while smoking weed and jerking off cuz this is a abomination mate

2yr
primordialzero
primordialzeroLv2

The MC is very naive, it doesn't seem like he's done bad things in his past life and that already damages the foundation of the fic because the authors are like that, they start well but most start to put stupid things that damage the fic in the tags, he says system but he system where is it?

2yr
Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14

straight trash in a book form. grammar is awful and the story just hops all over the place. no character growth or background. don't waste your time.

2yr
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