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ShreeChan
ShreeChanLv42yr
2022-07-09 13:15

I am sorry to say but even if the writing ability is good and the female lead has a good character, the story drags on too much. A single incident goes on more than 10 episodes and above. The villagers are too Annoying on top of that.

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Namasaya
NamasayaLv15

I read this review and you know I got to a point here and I went to go look it up MTL wise this book is 198 chapters in his original form. The reason episodes are taking more than 10 chapters is because they had to break each chapter up into almost I want to say 12 chapters each.

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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

Review until Chapter 40:[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Had to wait awhile until all 40 chapters are out and I finally got to read it. I was busy reading others. Anyhoo, the plot is interesting. I just can’t get over as to what happened to those villains in the apocalyptic era. Did they all die when she self-detonated? How about that different blood drop of hers that was taken by that crazy Madman Professor Lu? The plot is quite fast paced and so far no holes that need to be patched up. It was nice also since opening scene was the apocalypse and the scene of her being an experimental object. So background was given. Characters: Lin Xinyan was 32 when she crossed over to a 12-years old malnourished shortie with stunted growth. Her appearance was that of a 7-8 years old girl. Though when she introduced herself to the male lead God General Jiang and his troop, she said she’s 8. This FL was fiesty one but quite eloquent. She transmigrated with her dual powers that mutated into 9-powers. So she can definitely kick some buTt!😈 God General Jiang is 24 at the start of the story. Though I can’t say I like it or I find it cute, he acts like a dummy around the FL. But then again, he’s not close to anyone and has been ostracized by his family and women similar to the FL. He got closer to his current troop at a later stage of his career. So basically, he has no experience dealing with girls, women and children. 😊 Both FL Lin and ML Jiang were ostracized and marginalized as Jinxes. So two Jinxes = Lucky Charms… that’s what I think. Lin Dawei also thinks this way as his family is also a jinx, no women survive in his family. So he plans to marry his son with FL Lin Yuelan. There were hardly grammatical errors or rather it was more of typos like 42 instead of 24, finance instead of fiancée etc. So I have a 5 stars for translation quality. Overall, this is another good read from Lonelytree’s translated works. So don’t hesitate to pick it up, add it to your library and read it. Vote for this book too.🥰🥰🥰 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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