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Deugan
DeuganLv132yr
2022-08-27 19:28

I like these game system, dungen, monster mc, villain mc, evolution genres but to be honest they werent executed well. I am a junky of these genres but even for me after reading 1 volum of the book it was really hard to continue reading it. ı can see thar author trying their best and serms like its their first novel but I am really cant read it. Start was ğretty good even though it was classic starting scnerio. Had a good cheat advantage but after a few chapters, cheat advantages started to pile up. %70 of the chapters wrre mad rof reading mc's growth messages and character panel. Other 20% was just talking about how he was superior now against the monsters and humans even though his lvl was much lower them. The remaining %10 was about bad jokes and a few references to famous manwhas or animes( which was a good twist at the start but then later on it become a bit too much...). I will not get into too much detail for this review but if you like novels with certain baseline seriousness and balanced mc growth systems then this is not a novel for you. At later 40-70 chapters I was power reading the novel by speed scrolling the wrtings like how you read a chünese novrl with 3000 chapters which has many filler words and dialoges so that author can reach his daily word count. Its really sad but this can happen as no one is pro when they start doing something. Getting good takes time. I hope you can achiev a fast growth with this novel and ypur community as an Author. Keep up the hard work 👍

RE:BORN Zombie

Killix_Kreed
4.3
169 Chs

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Killix_Kreed
Killix_KreedAuthor

Thank you so much for pointing out the flaws. Hope it wasn't all bad? Have a good one👍

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InfiniteZer0
InfiniteZer0Lv13

I like the same genres as well. I have been having a hard time finding good ones in those categories over the last few months though, have any suggestions?

2yr
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Deugan
DeuganLv13

Btw when I didnt recommended any failed product. When I re read my reply to you it seemed like what I recommends are what I define as failed product.

InfiniteZer0:I like the same genres as well. I have been having a hard time finding good ones in those categories over the last few months though, have any suggestions?
2yr
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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Killix_Kreed
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Author here, with a shameless 5star review. Please vote your power stones for this wonderful book, and do leave a review. The story will update every other day, and if you have any questions or complaints, comment. Thanks.

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Hensonn
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Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force

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Dretno
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Great book, interesting and very well written. I hope you continue writing it and don't drop it. The story is very unique and I am hooked to see what will happen next. I love the villain mc very much and hope you don't add any romance or harem in the future. That is all I have to say, stay well and keep writing.

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XLucifer_AceX
XLucifer_AceXLv1

Although the idea Is fresh its not new I have seen it only 2 time and the authors of the novels dropped it so I hope you can do better and not drop I also hope you get a bit original in the all the new race names like cursed undead, necrosis undead , blood abomination, and some baddass sounding name( my one sound awful U _ U ) instead of using words like warrior high comander and what not just feels like some mobs In some rpg to collect exp it dosent feels exclusive to the mc and the idea that he can combine two beneficial trait from two eace like the night vision from owls and farsight from eagel wings from doves eco location and from bats and combine them their is a lot of potential but you just focus on zombies who due to constantly being shown as week and pathetic just feels off and its not that zombie are some unique things all undead have the perks for not getting tired hope you rename the novel to something better get past naming the the race of the mc as some weak sounding mob form rpg English is not my native language

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Arcibo
ArciboLv15

Cool premise let down by inconsistent character writing as well as blatant copying of solo levelling characters and traits, decent writing quality let down by trying to be something it’s not.

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MindfulTheWriter
MindfulTheWriterLv13

at first the story had way too much potential to be true, I liked the MC abilities and evolution stuff until it became a copy of solo leveling, hear me out, the author had to give MC an ability to rise zombies with the same activation word as solo leveling, similar characters. For me I would have enjoyed it more if instead of becoming a solo leveling copy it focused on MC and after that he started to meet powerful zombies who decided to follow him instead of a necromancer who summons zombies out of thin air. luv to the author <3

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bjoe3860
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Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.

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Shanky_S
Shanky_SLv5

currently at chapter 10. novel looks good. keep up the good work author. . . . . . .

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