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Hensonn
HensonnLv13yr
2022-05-03 19:11

Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force

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Hensonn
HensonnLv1

I advise the author to make the main character more adult and reduce the amount of humor (although it's not even funny) and obscene language that would be inappropriate for zombies.Believe me, this greatly spoils the atmosphere of the novel. The reader is trying to see the main character in the role of a zombie and not a person this will help you not to miss the audience

xxgamer_tommasozz
xxgamer_tommasozzLv1

can you recommend me a novel where mc chasing power

heavenly_demon000
heavenly_demon000Lv3

Greed:all for what?? 🔥🔥

xxgamer_tommasozz:can you recommend me a novel where mc chasing power
xxgamer_tommasozz
xxgamer_tommasozzLv1

i like

heavenly_demon000:Greed:all for what?? 🔥🔥
Lifeajourneyofpain
LifeajourneyofpainLv2

.....

xxgamer_tommasozz:i like
jose_soto
jose_sotoLv2

The Ruined Death Knight

xxgamer_tommasozz:can you recommend me a novel where mc chasing power
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