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Gortox
GortoxLv52yr
2022-05-27 21:14

Yet another trash story without any thought put into it. It has more plot holes than a sieve. Characters have less dimensions than computer programs. For translation what better description than 'Qidian Translation Quality' so worse than MTL.

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AAA001
AAA001Lv10

yet another water army to defame good novel so other trash can be selected.

Ace20
Ace20Lv14

Ong

AAA001:yet another water army to defame good novel so other trash can be selected.
Gortox
GortoxLv5

Congrats you just learned some Chinese thingy and now want to show it to the whole world, outstanding. Now please be on your way with the added knowledge that the world doesn't revolve around you and that just because you like something everybody else has to like it as well!

AAA001:yet another water army to defame good novel so other trash can be selected.
Divine_rod
Divine_rodLv4

You do know it's a Chinese app right and He said his opinion and you said yours What's the difference between you two Well ofc you wanted to look superior to him

Gortox:Congrats you just learned some Chinese thingy and now want to show it to the whole world, outstanding. Now please be on your way with the added knowledge that the world doesn't revolve around you and that just because you like something everybody else has to like it as well!
Gortox
GortoxLv5

Calling someone water army does not mean stating opinion in my books and I believe that holds true for most people. Stating opinion would've been making his own review or saying why he believes I'm wrong, not pinning me as a 'bot'.

Divine_rod:You do know it's a Chinese app right and He said his opinion and you said yours What's the difference between you two Well ofc you wanted to look superior to him
Saad_Yousuf
Saad_YousufLv4

bro I have at least read this book's Author's other book which is pretty good and without any plot holes and characters are very likable if you are not spouting nonsense what are you doing then? You said this book have plot holes can you even show it to anyone.

Gortox:Calling someone water army does not mean stating opinion in my books and I believe that holds true for most people. Stating opinion would've been making his own review or saying why he believes I'm wrong, not pinning me as a 'bot'.
Gortox
GortoxLv5

I read this a month ago and I it wasn't even entertaining so how do you expect me to remember what it was about let alone the plot holes? I'm not wasting another 30 min of my life to read through it again just to point out all the plot holes it has. But if I don't remember wrongly there are plenty of paragraph comments informing you of their existence and explaining some of them. Don't remember if it was this one or another, but there was a comment about how to fix the plot holes, again I'm not sure if it was this novel or another that had that.

Saad_Yousuf:bro I have at least read this book's Author's other book which is pretty good and without any plot holes and characters are very likable if you are not spouting nonsense what are you doing then? You said this book have plot holes can you even show it to anyone.
aisea_havea
aisea_haveaLv2

It is harsh to 1 star it. I have just read through it and there is ultimately no major plot holes that you speak of? If it's talking about plot armor then the author later shows further in the story that he was actually being guided the whole time to be a chess piece in a bigger plot which he overturns with his reality Sims, if you're talking about munchkinning and not going the optimal route for the most gains then you should go watch game speed runs and not stories where it actually needs a plot, if you are referring to the overall plot then no, the plot comes together like a puzzle and you need to read the story to gain all the puzzle pieces which actually fit together pretty well. If there were plot holes as you say, they were pretty minor to the point you ruined yourself of this story simply cos it isn't perfect. If it's boring then you merely need to drop it, 1 starring it is childish and pretentious at the same time. Ultimately I can't understand what you hate about the story cos your comment was basically spam with how copy pasted it is.

Gortox:I read this a month ago and I it wasn't even entertaining so how do you expect me to remember what it was about let alone the plot holes? I'm not wasting another 30 min of my life to read through it again just to point out all the plot holes it has. But if I don't remember wrongly there are plenty of paragraph comments informing you of their existence and explaining some of them. Don't remember if it was this one or another, but there was a comment about how to fix the plot holes, again I'm not sure if it was this novel or another that had that.
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