Thank you everyone for taking the time to read my book .Though I am still new to writing I will continue to improve on my work. So I hope you guys can stick around until then. Alot of plot twist and cool fights planned

It's an interesting read for a fantasy novel. Granted, it starts up slow, but it later picks up the pace with it's enjoyable scenes and unique events. I can tell, the author put in the work.

First, congrats on writing this. I hope you enjoy the ride up to the end! About the story: I usually like multiple povs, since their possibilities are greater. The characters are interesting and the world background is put in view enough for the readers to get interested. Keep up the good work!

Okay so you have some show vs tell problems but that will be cured with time and experience. That being said. The battle is realistic I like the fact the commander knows how important the choke point and what his army is doing because he should know. Keep practicing and good things will happen

Your start was quite captivating and wonderfully done. I support your writing as I believe it is one of kind given that your start is lovable.

Great read! I really enjoy how this novel tells the story, and the author is good at doing so. The novel itself is also very interesting, with magic that makes me want to see more, characters that interact interestingly, and a plot that just makes me wanting more of it.

Great story. Though chapters are a little long it only adds to the enjoyment, The writing quality is crystal clear and easy to follow. The story itself is pretty fun and engaging so far. Very good! Best of luck author!

For it's Genre, this a good contender, the writing is good, the story progression is good. However, while bombastic and great, the action scenes can get confusing. Other than that, good story.

So i only read few chapters but i really enjoyed reading it. The action sequence was very interesting, i felt like i was watching a movie. So that is all i have a say, if you are a new reader then give it a try.

Fantastic novel. Although, I struggled a bit at the starting to get a grip on the characters and the direction of the novel, the interested sparked later on. The action sequence impressed me. Keep up the good work. Looking forward for future chapters.