McCrunch

Great work, very descriptive with both the environment and character emotions, Very visual and helps with immersion. Writing quality was quite good I had no trouble keeping up with the story. I've read up to chapter 10 and I would say overall good job.

ok first chapter. feels more like a motivational speech though.

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Great story grammar was flawless flow was unbroken. Characters where distinctive and likeable. A werewolf story that's actually interesting nice.

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Great read, was simple and easy to read and although there was a few breaks in flow, it want too bad. Mc was relatable which is good compared to most other mc's here this one was tolerable. World building was okay but it can be expanded upon but i guess thats epected with only 13 chapters. Good job.

Wery interesting plot I don't think I have come across a premise like this which is a plus in my book. Some Grammer errors here and there but I make the same mistakes so not much of an issue for me. great story can't wait to see what happens next.