3star. the main problem is the mc himself. everything else is fine. the mc is just. hard to explain but mainly super boring. its more like a gaining powers simulator than it is a story.
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LIKEIt's meant to be him just going through souls series worlds. The story is made clear layer on. But I'll tell you now, sort of. When he was in mosquito form and got blood from Ciri parents. His DNA partially entered them. Ciri was slightly effected, Eredin discovered it and was able to extract it and become a greater threat, whereas her dad after getting the curse lifted, had the magic partially fuse the DNA with him. This made them both even mire serious threats then before and mc gonna need to stop them. Then there is something else but I'll leave it until later.
the amount of wishes you gave him as well is just too much even if it was by random chance. too much freedom on them. made it boring fast
The sous series worlds are going to be much more powerful. Mc hasn't encountered much challenge so far since all of them where starter bosses. However, from now on, everything will actually provide a Challenge for and force him to take it more seriously. To put it into perspective on how strong Gwyn is. 15 of the Valar barely fought against Ancalgon the Black since their power is sealed while within Eä. Gwyn isn't restricted and could easily solo Ancalgon. Everything is much more powerful since he'll be fighting God's and Lords from here on out.
then ill take another look at it