webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.

Review detail

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv132yr50ShadesOfAss

You succum to readers suggestion way to easily and it turns me off from reading Literally one dude just kept spamming to leave Malia for Stiles and give Stiles powers blah blah blah. And then you instantly remove Malia from ever having a relationship with MC It’s worse because they don’t even stay together and break up in canon You also even started to consider the giving powers to Stiles thing, which is another red flag. Idk if it’s just me, but giving powers to characters that never had any is just not enjoyable to read A VERY COMMON occurrence for teen wolf fanfics is MCs having some sort of relationship with Allison but then they break up and she goes for Scott Since you still have no idea what you want for the romance, and MC and Allison are being set up as a future couple, I can already see this happening…..Its so obvious Of course you haven’t written anything like this yet, and you might not have fully decided yet. You could still possibly leave Allison and MC together or keep Stiles human ~ but you still easily just left Malia out the window after literally ONE guy asked for it. So I dont have much hope really I don’t care for who MC ends up with, I just hope it isn’t a MESS of relationships. Unfortunately I already lost interest I really liked your Legacies ff tho

altalt

Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.

confused4you

Liked by 20 people

LIKE

Replies14

confused4you
confused4youAuthorconfused4you

okay man i get it but you are right i really do those things but the reason I am asking for your suggestions for this is because i have only seen teen wolf S1 and i don't know wth nogitsune is who maliya was and that allison goes with Issac. i ask because I don't know and you guys know more about it cause you have seen it if you give ideas i can pick and choose from them and make it better if you think Malia can be good love interest then alright and thank you for reading legacies and i do hope you stay to read what i make of this FF.

BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv4BLACK_GLOOM

I didn't spam for stalia. I just wrote my opinion in the comments in a single chapter, not everyone. The reason, I said to give stiles powers was because stiles is one of the guys in teen wolf who uses his brain, so I thought how it would be if he had both brains and brains. And, I wrote all that as a suggestion from me, I don't care if the author does it or not. I think you gave this review cause you want the MC to be the only OP character and create a harem with all the teen wolf girls, while the guys look in awe at MC

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1350ShadesOfAss

I don’t mean to be rude, but I don’t see why you would make a Teen Wolf FF if you haven’t even seen the full series. I would get it if you at least watched up to like season 4 and decided to write off from there but 1 out of 6 is crazy

confused4you:okay man i get it but you are right i really do those things but the reason I am asking for your suggestions for this is because i have only seen teen wolf S1 and i don't know wth nogitsune is who maliya was and that allison goes with Issac. i ask because I don't know and you guys know more about it cause you have seen it if you give ideas i can pick and choose from them and make it better if you think Malia can be good love interest then alright and thank you for reading legacies and i do hope you stay to read what i make of this FF.
50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1350ShadesOfAss

Where in my review do I state I want a harem. I’m tired of harem stories. I enjoy reading ff with GOOD romance. I DONT enjoy reading about a ff with an author that gives other characters powers for no reason

BLACK_GLOOM:I didn't spam for stalia. I just wrote my opinion in the comments in a single chapter, not everyone. The reason, I said to give stiles powers was because stiles is one of the guys in teen wolf who uses his brain, so I thought how it would be if he had both brains and brains. And, I wrote all that as a suggestion from me, I don't care if the author does it or not. I think you gave this review cause you want the MC to be the only OP character and create a harem with all the teen wolf girls, while the guys look in awe at MC
confused4you
confused4youAuthorconfused4you

then what do you have a problem with dude i just said it's a good idea doesn't mean I'll do it.

50ShadesOfAss:I don’t mean to be rude, but I don’t see why you would make a Teen Wolf FF if you haven’t even seen the full series. I would get it if you at least watched up to like season 4 and decided to write off from there but 1 out of 6 is crazy
BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv4BLACK_GLOOM

Then what's your problem with stiles being in a relationship with Somalia? The powers aspect can be made good if the author writes like after being possessed by nogitsune, and getting rid of it. It changed him somehow. If author wants, he can do so much while keeping the MC strong than the other cast even with giving them powers. And, I said it was just my opinion. I was not forcing the author, I just told him what I thought. It's his wish, if he would use it or not

50ShadesOfAss:Where in my review do I state I want a harem. I’m tired of harem stories. I enjoy reading ff with GOOD romance. I DONT enjoy reading about a ff with an author that gives other characters powers for no reason
BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv4BLACK_GLOOM

*malia

BLACK_GLOOM:Then what's your problem with stiles being in a relationship with Somalia? The powers aspect can be made good if the author writes like after being possessed by nogitsune, and getting rid of it. It changed him somehow. If author wants, he can do so much while keeping the MC strong than the other cast even with giving them powers. And, I said it was just my opinion. I was not forcing the author, I just told him what I thought. It's his wish, if he would use it or not
TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv13TheLonelyGod

confused4you
confused4youAuthorconfused4you

when is the new chapter for tvd dude?

TheLonelyGod:
image
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Thanks for saving time.i don't like when mc become a match makers or give the girls like they own them!..

Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv13Leylin_123

tampoco me gusta cuando un interes amoroso termina estando con otro. pero le dare una oportunidad a este fic, llevo rato buscando fanfics de teen wolf, legacies, crepusculo, etc.

Man_of_culture_69:Thanks for saving time.i don't like when mc become a match makers or give the girls like they own them!..
knightInSpikyArmor
knightInSpikyArmorLv2knightInSpikyArmor

Isn't it a good thing if author listens to the the community?

Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4Jonathan_Lam_2034

not when it ruins the story

knightInSpikyArmor:Isn't it a good thing if author listens to the the community?
Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

bruh if you dont know anything about teen wolf why write about it? tf

confused4you:okay man i get it but you are right i really do those things but the reason I am asking for your suggestions for this is because i have only seen teen wolf S1 and i don't know wth nogitsune is who maliya was and that allison goes with Issac. i ask because I don't know and you guys know more about it cause you have seen it if you give ideas i can pick and choose from them and make it better if you think Malia can be good love interest then alright and thank you for reading legacies and i do hope you stay to read what i make of this FF.