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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20341d
    Commented

    a lot of mistakes slipped through your proofreading. If you even did so

    Ch 44 Announcement!!!
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
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    Commented

    her

    "Are you telling the truth?" He asks me, with a sad and hopeful expression on his face.
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
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    Commented

    do you not read through these

    "Thank you, King Azzuri. I would like you to keep this."
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20341d
    Commented

    what? You mean from?

    Hearing Steve's voice, he turns around. Steve throws his sword at him, which was taken by Warrior Woman.
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20344d
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    why use wanna? I know people say it but in writing it's best to be more proper.

    He seems to never wanna know where water he always uses comes from, food that he eats that is always ready on the table, electricity that he uses everyday to play his games all night long.
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    Naruto: The Mightiest Kai
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20345d
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    This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is

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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20345d
    Commented

    that's a good reason

    I think he was able to generate faith from all the people he saved or liberated.
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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20345d
    Commented

    ?

    I had a little plan for this fruit. I'm not gonna let the fat Alvida eat it regardless of how hot she would become. No I plan to give this to a girl that deserves it. But I won't meet her until I go visit a certain spooky island.
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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Stronghold
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20346d
    Commented

    but he doesn't have the shield?

    Realizing his disadvantage, Steve tries to end the fight quickly. He attempts to strike the king's neck with his shield, but the king draws a khopesh from his back—a typical Egyptian sword with a curved blade. He strikes, slicing through Captain's shield as if it were paper.
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    Baldur Odinson: God of Light
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20346d
    Commented

    how did he re watch the movies if he hadn't even finished filming

    It had been months since I'd signed on, so in the meantime, I'd watched and rewatched the movies repeatedly until they were seared into my brain. This scene was originally done well; the only changes I felt worth making were Harry's awkward expression when looking at the photos and the stilted hug with Hagrid. But besides that, I'd keep it simple.
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    I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20348d
    Posted

    low rating because story is non existent

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    DC: I am Batman with Gacha System
    Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20348d
    Replied to Hanish_Ram

    Stephen wolf bruh

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    Marvel Stephen Wolf
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_20349d
    Commented

    what about pokemon that are just evil

    Even if someone like Danzo tried to get a Pokemon, it would be impossible for him to officially buy one because no Pokemon would want to follow him, and if he got a Pokemon from another Ninja, he wouldn't be able to brainwash it and would probably be attacked by the little creature.
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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203410d
    Replied to neo_325

    it's from the movie vs goetia I think

    "Say hello to Fujimaru Ritsuka for me, Ishtar..."
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    Fate/The Hunter and His Doll
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203410d
    Replied to Taro

    Omg he can type, someone give this person a medal.

    As the game progressed, the opposing team managed to gain the upper hand and started to move towards Harry's team's goal post. Harry could see Ron, one of the opposing team's strongest players, leading the charge towards their goal. Ron was skilled at dribbling the ball and evading tackles, making it difficult for Harry and his teammates to stop him.
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    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203411d
    Replied to Taro

    exactly what an American would say

    As the game progressed, the opposing team managed to gain the upper hand and started to move towards Harry's team's goal post. Harry could see Ron, one of the opposing team's strongest players, leading the charge towards their goal. Ron was skilled at dribbling the ball and evading tackles, making it difficult for Harry and his teammates to stop him.
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    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203412d
    Replied to Taro

    typical American

    As the game progressed, the opposing team managed to gain the upper hand and started to move towards Harry's team's goal post. Harry could see Ron, one of the opposing team's strongest players, leading the charge towards their goal. Ron was skilled at dribbling the ball and evading tackles, making it difficult for Harry and his teammates to stop him.
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    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203412d
    Commented

    rip no infinity stone saber

    Peter's mind, however, was light years away. He was elated, knowing that the Infinity Stones, at least to Gamora's knowledge, did not exist in this reality.
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    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203413d
    Commented

    just straight up murder. Didn't even bother going for the defeat option?

    Harry used the distraction to weave through the chaos, employing his agile Leaf Style Taijutsu to swiftly approach two of the agents and with precise strikes of his Kunai to their neck, he killed them.
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    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
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  • Jonathan_Lam_2034
    Jonathan_Lam_203413d
    Commented

    ?

    Harry used the distraction to weave through the chaos, employing his agile Leaf Style Taijutsu to swiftly approach two of the agents and with precise strikes of his Kunai to their neck, he killed them.
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    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
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