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Yuki_55
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2022-06-12 06:09

Writing quality/world building/character development - was there any? not only dose it not make sence at times, it also appears to me like there are some missing chapters. 1 - Cha Hae-In was stuck in a red gate, which some how turend s rank… mc rescuse her, but wait! he actully dosent!!! how? simple, the whole chapter is skipped… I’m not even kidding, mc finds Cha Hae-In close to death but the chapter ends there, the next chapter is completely diffrence, no explanarion on how or why… 2 - Most if not all the chapters include the status… You’ll be reading what’s the mc’s stats most of the time, chapter 1 okey, chapter 2 okey, but don’t show us useless numbers over and over and over again. It honestly feels like the status was used to make up the word count. 3 - Mc’s powers are basickly the same like Sung’s, but he uses a sword… Nothing original or new from the rest of the solo leveling ff’s Not worth the time, I should have rather just re read the novel of solo leveling then this…

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