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leo26
leo26Lv122yr
2022-04-13 03:33

If author wants to delete my review then I won't mind it because this review is heavily biased, I just hate the fact that his special class is just a repackaged version of shadow monarch, just make something original for a special power instead of making him sun jin woo 2.0 with a sword, there are soo many cool abilities but noooo I want the my protagonist to have the same power as the original protagonist but with a different name which completely undermines the original shadow monarch ability and why the shadow monarch was so feared, any way sorry for the rant and good luck with your story and as I said you can delete the review if you think it's too unfair.

Solo Leveling: A Leveling Knight (Up for adoption)

Idk_wqe2
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Idk_wqe2
Idk_wqe2Author

...Okay man... Im unoriginal here, I need help. Help me.

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leo26
leo26Lv12

Man, now that I re read what I wrote, I feel I have been too harsh on you , it's just that so many story use that power and I guess this was the breaking point, so if you want me to delete this review just say so, your writing ability is decent which already puts you above 70% of the stories on this site, so sorry for ranting about it 😞

Idk_wqe2:...Okay man... Im unoriginal here, I need help. Help me.
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Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

You could give him a class that's pretty common fantasy wise but isn't in solo leveling so you have a lot to build on like an alchemist (you could get inspiration for its development from animes like full metal alchemist and novels like regresdor instruction manual) or an archer (many famous mythological archers like cupid, Sagittarius and artemis, you could even put a twist on it and do something different like giving him the ability to fight close range by grabbing his arrows after just shooting them and using them to travel long distances in very short times (Sagittarius in the manga Yasin no last boss did this), or if you wanted your Mc to be op and have the theme of collecting soemthing from the enemy and it becoming your own, like Shadow monarch, you could just use the idea of gilgamesh and his powers. These are just ideas you should pick something you really like so you can build many ideas from it, hope this helps.

Idk_wqe2:...Okay man... Im unoriginal here, I need help. Help me.
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