Review Detail of Professional_hater in Pathway To Immortality (Free)

Honestly I’m not really good at reviews so I’ll be just saying stuff that comes to mind So far I’m on chapter 19 the writing is good with some small mistakes here and there but it doesn’t affect the story at all As for the characters apart from the mc and a few disposable side character there hasn’t been many character appearances or development the The start of the story is unique yet not rare so it’s at least refreshing t o read though it’s kinda cliché at some point world building is also good with a cool power system