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Review Detail of pablo_Pikacchu in Sword God in a World of Magic

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The story keeps the reader hooked, it is truly exciting. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit lacking. Sentences are sometimes repetitive in their content, and their structure does not make for a fluent reading experience. The inner monologue feels a bit too descriptive.

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Sword God in a World of Magic

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Edit here, because I did not find an edit option: writing style improved a good bit lateron (ch. 60+). It's a great read by now and lots of fun.