Thanks for that review. 100% agree with every point you made.

As of Ch 55: 1. The writing style is okay-ish. Not bad but definitely not good either. 2. Sometimes the story feels like it's written by a high school edgelord. MC wants to destroy humanity or some sh*t like that, which is just super cringy and unconvincing. 3. There is barely any tension in the novel. 4. Before you know it you are yawning at chapter 50 and wonder why the f there is still barely any development. It's supposed to be about trickery, but the MC barely develops on that matter. He is not smart either, although it seems like the author is trying to make him look smart. 5. MC is probably supposed to look badass, but he just acts like a pissed off little kid. Summary: I regret having wasted my time with this novel.

He acts like a child, so immature. Man up, dude. It's almost painful to watch

How come nobody suspects hime to be Joker? Just by his bodyposture, stature, movements and especially his voice Alea or her Grandpa should suspect this option by now!

Their interaction is so childish, immature and petty. Srsly the dialogue sucks

Sometimes like here the story gets a bit more interesting. Overall it has too little tension

As others have sad this fight is super unconvincing. Such a level difference shouldn't be overcome by a mere smoke bomb and an E level skill. This makes me loose my excitment for future fight scenes

Edit here, because I did not find an edit option: writing style improved a good bit lateron (ch. 60+). It's a great read by now and lots of fun.

The equation in a warm area (50 C to 40 C while bringing the surrounding area to 30 C) does not seem to make sense, does it?

The writing style is very advanced. Author is super talented, as can be seen in shadow slave as well. Character description and their development is top notch. Dialogues are well written and a lot of fun to read. However, the story itself might not be for everyone. It is fast paced, but not your typical weak to strong op mc development. Instead it reads much more like a classical (print) novel would. Lastly, the author conveyes emotions very well. The sad parts can make you cry. The romance part can make you fly

Why would a panther go for an arm instead of the neck? Unrealistic. Still a fun read overall.

The story keeps the reader hooked, it is truly exciting. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit lacking. Sentences are sometimes repetitive in their content, and their structure does not make for a fluent reading experience. The inner monologue feels a bit too descriptive.

The great storyline makes for a fun and exciting read. I wish the writing style would be better though. Sometimes sentences are repetitive, sometimes the inner monologue is too descriptive. Often the connection from sentence to sentence feels unnatural. As for now it is primarily the exciting story which keeps the reader hooked.

I am just amazed with how well written this romance part is! ... hope we see something similar with Neph or someone else in shadow slave! :))

So well written, capturing the sadness, hollowness, loneliness.

It's such a great novel! So, so well written. I read shadow slave before, and now I found this gem. To me, it is kind of sad that you dropped/finished this one. I guess the reason why it was not as successfull is about marketing and luck, and maybe also genre. E. g. the frontpicture of the novel is not really so great in my opinion. However, one thing is amazing, and that is your writing style. You depict characters very well, and the dialogues are really exceptional. While shadow slave is more webnovel-style, this novel here is a thing that could find a publisher for a standard print book. I really hope you have success with your future writing and continue your journey as a novelist.