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Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv152yr
2023-02-04 09:42

The main character is a Mary Sue, he hears of a problem, immediately knows how to fix it, just because, this leads to there being no stakes and a very boring read. I would not recommend it, as it has been written without any conflict. despite having such a good premise, it has been squandered by this author. :(

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Josh_Mendoz
Josh_MendozLv13

Ik right the premise got me in the beginning but it got boring quick

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