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Best_Human_EvilLv42yr
2022-07-15 01:20

It's a good story, but the translation leaves a little to be desired, many Chinese phrases that don't make sense. But most of all, a part of me always dies when I read that Kurumi is an "Elf" instead of a SPIRIT!!!

Kurumi Tokisaki's Planar Journey

nyawdao2
3.5
530 Chs

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

Well, it's a fanfic, you'll hardly find one with a good translation since good translators can earn good money translating an original novel or simply working as a translator. but I have to agree with the "elf" problem

2yr
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Black9_FOXY
Black9_FOXYLv4

maybe because elves are related to spirits

2yr
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LORD_sKY
LORD_sKYLv1

: Check out Naruto: Time Manipulation yes I'm the author and I have no shame in promoting it

2yr
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

Yuri ??

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Lao_Stev
Lao_StevLv3

Bad translation, instant drop.

2yr

nyawdao2
nyawdao2Author

When the Main God Space was destroyed, Mo Xiao, the reincarnator, taken away by the unknown light ball, entered the new world and found that he became Kurumi Tokisaki! The first world: Highschool of the Dead, the second world: The Dark Summoner of the Apocalypse, the third world: Marvel Universe, the fourth world: Tentative...

2yr
Jester_690
Jester_690Lv3

The interactions between characters is horrible, to the point where it is torturous to read the interactions between the char acters

2yr
Zoaper
ZoaperLv4

They only have the appearance of Kurumi and a little bit of her personality. They don't have her abilities.

1yr
Kurumi_tokisaki
Kurumi_tokisakiLv3

Is this just a copy of tokisaki kurumi plane journey put on to this app.

2yr
Black9_FOXY
Black9_FOXYLv4

Yo author keep up making this novel more amazing and i understand your english because me too sometimes my spelling is incorrect so please make this novel more and more exciting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2yr
Fu_Hua_
Fu_Hua_Lv4

Nah... I can't stomach the translation...

1yr
Zackking
ZackkingLv14

I just can’t it hurt my brain reading this

1yr
Alif_Lai
Alif_LaiLv2

really confusing, especially in character name, really bad

1yr
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