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CouchPotatoDandyLv58mth
2024-06-07 15:31

I've only read till chapter 5 and I lost interest. The grammar could be better as there were some mistakes in there. The flow of the story wasn't quite good and it was hard to understand the situations. The system too was not understandable and the author explanation was not enough to understand completely what's going on.

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