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For me there is no real connection to the MC. Was looking forward to reading about someone reincarnating into DxD as a Marvel Sorcerer, building up the Sanctums and a Mystic Arts Faction. Instead all of that is skipped, with the author stating there'll be a few flashbacks every now and then and an incredibly OP main character with a faction and everything straight from the start. If like me you came for faction/kingdom building and seeing an MC learn/create Marvelverse Mystic Arts in DxD, you'll be disappointed. Grammar is decent enough, could be worse, certainly beats MTL fics. World background and (main) character design is basically skipped, which just feels cheap, as such low scores. Same for story development really, as it really just feels like we skipped the first few books in the series just to get to canon characters for some reason. Most reviews so far seem to be pretty positive solely because this is a fanfic in an ecchi anime world without a harem... That's nice and all folks, but it doesn't really give much of an accurate representation of what to expect for prospective readers.

It's as if the author had a brilliant idea but was too lazy to write the story, so he wrote a book that's just the Epilogue. It would have been awesome to have a fanfic about someone in DxD establishing the mystical arts, creating shrines and taking on students as they try to become powerful, but instead we have a story of the daily life of someone who has done all this millennia before and is now just enjoying life.

a non harem dxd ff with no romance? 5 STARS! still have not read this tho, so i'll change or delete my review after reading this............

a good idea badly handled. the mc reincarnates and then we meet him again millions of years after his reincarnation as sorcerer supreme in dxd, we know nothing about him and what happened to him after his death. the author wants to explain all that using flashbacks. the story is often interruped by a boring and mostly irrelevant flashback, once the present continues the author seems to forget where he let off before the start of the flashback and start another conflict without resolving the one before. this leads to a lot of confusion. a lot of POV changes and respective flashbacks as well, its just not enjoyable to read. the moment the story seems to pick up the author sucker punches you with yet another flashback, disrupting the current plot in the middle of a fight of all things. in simpler terms you just can't get into this story.

This Is first time human have proper protector & honour in DXD. instead of using themselves for tool's & slave. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

to balance the numerous 5 star review that not even read the fic and are giving simple because is not harem, here is my 1 star review without having read the story and simple because it dont have harem (in a obviously harem world)

I like the idea, but you suck at making it happen. I love the no harem part, (can’t even find a story without one) Grammar is nice too. The only thing I dislike is world building and story telling. You’re awful at it. I thought it was going to be a simple reincarnation story, wrong! It’s just a jumble of plot lines, completely messy and unorganized. I’m not reading this.

He was just like a babysitter The mc is more l8ke support character ..................................................................................................................

Other reviews already stated this but I might as well say the same thing just so my review can give some balance to the other 5 star reviews who only care that it's not harem. Long story short the author wrote the end of the story in the first few chapters then went on to enjoy life of the mc afterwards in a slice of life style. No details or plot just the epilogue. Then after the tourney arc we get some weird bs chat room arc and a random god he needs to kill because his mom was murdered and he needs power. But for such a serious goal for the mc you used a slice of life fun thing like a chat room for his power trip? This whole story is such a mess and the author clearly doesn't know what he is doing even if he thinks he does. SPOILER - Adding Anya from SpyxFamily into the chat room was a big mistake. Not to mention Iruma is also annoying and a bad character to add. You have an infinite number of characters from everywhere to choose from, im sure you can find actually decent and likable characters to pick from.