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Getsucced
GetsuccedLv12yr
2022-04-11 03:44

If u let vulcan go scot free before he goes to earth then im not changing the review cuz why bother writing a fic if u dont change an ending

Marvel's: Atom

Thomas_Hodge
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Ventallion
VentallionLv15

That is so stupid. Who says that the ending has to change if your writing a fic? The focus of a fic will always be the journey towards that ending.

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marcelll3214
marcelll3214Lv2

Yep but if nothing changes then it is boring waste of time.

Ventallion:That is so stupid. Who says that the ending has to change if your writing a fic? The focus of a fic will always be the journey towards that ending.
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TheGreatest1
TheGreatest1Lv4

if a mc is only a narrator who does nothing why should u read this story instead of the original

Ventallion:That is so stupid. Who says that the ending has to change if your writing a fic? The focus of a fic will always be the journey towards that ending.
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Ventallion
VentallionLv15

I never said that the story has to be the same thing. Just that the ending can remain the same if the author wants. For example Harry Potter kills Voldemort in the original books and in a lot of fanfics. It's just the journey towards the end that's has to be different.

TheGreatest1:if a mc is only a narrator who does nothing why should u read this story instead of the original
2yr
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Ventallion
VentallionLv15

but from your comment, I'm guessing the author didn't change anything from the original story and not just the ending, in which case I do agree with you both

TheGreatest1:if a mc is only a narrator who does nothing why should u read this story instead of the original
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Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

Not so sure about that chief, I've read some pretty awesome PoV fanfics, they're good for giving new life to an old story.

TheGreatest1:if a mc is only a narrator who does nothing why should u read this story instead of the original
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Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_AlbertoLv2

This story seemed to have potential, but it seems that the Author is dedicating himself to making the protagonist do absolutely nothing to change the Canon, even as an Original Character, the main character is not doing anything good!

2yr

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_AlbertoLv2

This story seemed very good at first, but it's a disappointment, the fanfic continues the same nonsense as the Canon, with the main character just following the flow of the original story without adding almost anything!

2yr
LastGod
LastGodLv5

really good the only downside is it reads like a comic book. The marvel comics were always chaotic. No hope no peace just death and destruction. Thats why DC was my fav. Their was never a happy ending in marvel. Thats the kind of feeling this fanfic invokes. It's really good writing, though.

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Buat_N
Buat_NLv1

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