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Ok liking it so far.. still some repeated sentences but better that the first few chapters
Bruv.. does his parents just forget he wants to be an actor every chapter? Your AI slop is beginning to bore me
Repeating dialogue… whatever AI your using, go for a better one like Claude.
Like where it’s going.. though needs better dialogue. Also dude needs hobbies lol Business, investment, own a sports team in England. Would add more depth to the story
AI dialogues. To be fair, if you use the right AI tool and program it, it can generate much better dialogue that sound human.
Kids been polishing since he was young.. much younger than salman and shar rukh.. if he still Lacks polish means he doesn’t have enough talent lol
Like the story soo far but a lot of repeating topics and lines..
I say go for tech, songs, go own a football team in the premier league. If you want to try out an OC movie, go for it. If it doesn’t work out, then you have your answer. Atleast you tried :)
I’m always hesitant when a translator changes nationali from Chinese to Japanese. Nothing against the idea but during translation, something always slips thru that kind of ruins the immersion. But yeah go for it!
Like the fic but you should have just kept his Chinese name. Now you have an American named guy who’s parents also have American names playing in the Asian championship. Plus all the Yao ming stuff… makes 0 sense