This story has plenty of good ideas. Too bad the author keeps failing to deliver on them. An original gap fruit has the potential to be storybreakingly powerful... and the MC barely does anything creative with it. He might as well have given himself the Door Door fruit. Recruiting Baby 5 seemed interesting and had potential for an emotional bond with an underused character... for all of one chapter or so before the author relegated her to being a minor character and go building a harem for whatever reason. And he isn't even consistent on that front. He simps for Luffy so hard that he refuses to do anything that might affect the future of the SHs, passing up great crew members like Robin just because she will be in the SHs. This story is a collection of half measures and disappointments, and a complete waste of time.

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very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Terlalu banyak timeskip yg menyebabkan pengembangan karakter kurang dan juga cerita sangat terburu buru 😑~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you know a fanfic is gonna be bad when there are multiple grammar errors in the synopsis. I recommend getting an editor. i hate word requirements on webnovel.

good work, waiting for more chapters. and please don't drop this, I like it when the fan fiction keep the power within the world they are in

Был потенциал..

Even after dropping this ff ,it's still hard to not come and have peek on what happens 😩 I'm surely a hopeless case aren't I?, it's just like every story, there's always something you won't like about a story or a film as perfection is only for God, but it's still this is very good FF that's why every time I come pass by it, curiosity overcome me to see what's the last updates 😄

A yukari yakumo wish.com version.... YOU THOUGHT IT WAS A LINE OF DOTS BUT IT WAS YOUR MOM!!! *star platinum ost plays*

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