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So far ive liked the concept I can see a lot of potential in the novel my main problem is the pacing is a bit weird but its fine, another problem is that its a bit cringy but the author is still new so I wont criticise, keep up the good work

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Undying Reverence

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Yeah I've noticed that my pacing isn't too good its all over the place, but ill be sure to try to fix it, ty for the review