So far ive liked the concept I can see a lot of potential in the novel my main problem is the pacing is a bit weird but its fine, another problem is that its a bit cringy but the author is still new so I wont criticise, keep up the good work

Welp another chapter next chapter coming out soon so yeah btw if anyone reads my novel can die son say anything it would rly help my conscious the only thing keeping me goin is FiraTheElf who voted 86 god power stone so a big thanks to you :3 hope you know your the only motivation left wow it’s like talking to my own pal all over again, I still wonder how she looked heard she was form France well nvm bye guys and thanks!

Thanks for the helpful reply! I’m totally not sad that this lower my rating!

Np I just felt like searching it up

I don’t even remember when I wrote this

Yeah

Just read it myself and was visibly confused never knew I could write so bad bad but you should continue cus it dose t get better but at least it doesn’t get worse...I think

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