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Ron1n
Ron1nLv142yr
2022-10-27 07:01

The angst is tiresome due to the suspense this story is supposed to have. This story has the FL hating her husband based solely on what her sister in law tells her without question before and after rebirth. Can she not think for herself and find her own truths? FL has a right to hate the in law but has no proof for her husband’s own devious nature. ML, why did he marry her if he does not love her? Why would he be cold and aloof towards FL but still protects her over and over again? Why is he feeling like he’s been wronged. Too long, story is dragging. Wanted to like this story. I’m at chapter 100 still no resolution. Not liking anything about this story.

After Being Reborn, I Tortured The Vicious Sister-in-law

JQK
4.1
420 Chs

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Namasaya
NamasayaLv15

I'm with you too it's like I try to show that she's more intelligent after she was reborn but she still believe in the handful of words she was told at the end of her life by a malicious sister-in-law who clearly wanted to do nothing more than to hurt her like I would have stepped 20 steps back and been like let me think about everything right now because I keep on hinting at him being in a relationship with his adopted sister and he's confused it's all get out but for some reason I can't read that part of his face but I can read everything else I can tell everyone else is thinking I can tell when everyone else malicious but I can't get anything but confusion from this guy and I'm supposed to believe the sister still interested they make her conveniently dumb for plot reasons and it's making it hard to read this anymore

2yr
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CritiqueQueen
CritiqueQueenLv1

Finally I get useful comment here.

2yr
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ksy100408
ksy100408Lv4

I’m at roughly chapter 20 and I don’t know if I can continue. The story line is quite confusing with the timetable. In the future, when did she lose her baby before dying herself? When she goes back in time, the husband calls her little girl. How old is she? How long has she been married? It never gives the guy’s point of view. It’s not like a marriage of convenience. Why did he marry her? If any girl pesters him, does he just randomly ly married them? Please let me know if I should drop this. Thank you!

CritiqueQueen:Finally I get useful comment here.
2yr
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huahua
huahuaLv14

so without make-up you are 'as bland as a maid'? i don't know about this. typical stereotype of white skin, thin body, and perfect make-up seems to be making an entrance...

3yr

thakarriddhi11
thakarriddhi11Lv14

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]i love reincarnation stories. Sypnosis is good, hope it gets picked, waiting for the updates.

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Alexia_Obeng
Alexia_ObengLv13

I really hope the man the FL married in her past life is not the ML. Please Author don't disappoint me. I think other readers may have this concern too.

3yr
spiritstonermore
spiritstonermoreLv4

raws anyone ?..…...................…..…...................…..…...................…..…...................…..…...................…..…...................…

2yr
94owl
94owlLv4

I'm convinced she's going to get back with her husband, but I don't object to it as much as you might think. Hear me out: it's only the sister-in-law who *says* they're together and that he okayed her killing the child. Given what we've seen so far in the story, I'd guess that the sister-in-law was either delusional or lied. There's still the "only realised what you had once it was gone" attitude from the (presumed) ML, but he doesn't seem to have a ton of negative traits beyond not really caring for his wife (he didn't *emotionally abuse her or anything). The FL being a Feng Shui master is interesting; I'm curious to see where the whole "ML feels the pain FL experiences" goes; overall, I hope this gets picked. *I think the only thing you can say about their past relationship is that their communication skills were terrible -_-

2yr
kimz929
kimz929Lv5

if she is sis in law thn shud I assume tat they aren't divorced yet n he is the ML coz..I am really not a fan of toxic relationship ...any spoilers on who is the ML plzzz

2yr
bekhi
bekhiLv14

I think the author was tired of writing this story because the story ended before anything got resolved. It had great build-up but totally fell flat. So disappointing.

2yr
Wudai293
Wudai293Lv6

what kind of ending was this??? Where's that evil sister-in-law? This story had so much going for it that I can't believe they cut it short.

2yr
CritiqueQueen
CritiqueQueenLv1

GUYS HOW DID YOU RATE THE MAIN CHARACTERS? THE ML REALLY THAT DESERVING??????🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

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