For those who wants a proper story this isn't for you. This more of a summary rather than storytelling and have "blah blah blah" dialogues. For those who don't have prior knowledge about Naruto, this a no no for you. The Fmc gets stronger and everything gets dumber.
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LIKEwell why would anyone who didn't have prior knowledge of Naruto read a fic about naruto. afterall you need to know about chakra to start to know how to use ninjutsu. and its not like every fic can start with author describing about nine tail incident thats just dumb and that takes unnecessary chapters (like 2 to just introduce the world and main character ) and then you people drop it since its slow.
There are readers who read fanfics but don't know the world it came from. I even read some of them like GOT or Arifureta, whose world background i dont know about, but still understand it due to the fact that the author did it very well. This one though didn't. The dialogues are blah blah blah. Why not just shorten it instead of this?!đ I read this until the latest chap and it's still not good.đ
Leon_Luis_:well why would anyone who didn't have prior knowledge of Naruto read a fic about naruto. afterall you need to know about chakra to start to know how to use ninjutsu. and its not like every fic can start with author describing about nine tail incident thats just dumb and that takes unnecessary chapters (like 2 to just introduce the world and main character ) and then you people drop it since its slow.