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ravenously_fluked
ravenously_flukedLv42yr
2022-04-08 23:14

I really would like more fanfic of SCOG but I can't really understand Spanish. I do know that there may be some auto translation on apps but please, could you make an official English translation like what bukaro is doing? Thanks for the fanfic though.

El Paraiso Perdido: La Venida Del Dios De La Muerte Del Submundo

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Yes, I plan to do an English translation later, when I finish writing the novel and can invest the writing time in the translation, but from now on I apologize and clarify that I don't know English, so the translation will be with the translator of Google. And the quality may not be better than the automatic translation of the application

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ravenously_fluked
ravenously_flukedLv4

Okay thanks. Don't pressure yourself too hard though, from what I can gather from other comments, the story will be great!

EOA1:Yes, I plan to do an English translation later, when I finish writing the novel and can invest the writing time in the translation, but from now on I apologize and clarify that I don't know English, so the translation will be with the translator of Google. And the quality may not be better than the automatic translation of the application
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Ayoo bro, love this fanfic. I haven't read fanfic like this before, so 5 star! And author, I have some question. will you add the concept of world travel later after saving that world later?

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It's amazing even the chapters I read, one of the fanfics that has excellent potential compared to most fanfics on the platform, let's see in the future if it maintains the quality!☺️

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Truly excellent in all angles👌🏾. The only fault I find here is in the English translation in the latter chapters the gender indicators are messed up... She is he and his is hers, that is if you do not know the names of the characters you would be left in utter confusion. If you do know them how ever and are patient enough to ignore those errors, then congratulations, you have found yourself a hidden treasure😎

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