Item: El Paraiso Perdido: La Venida Del Dios De La Muerte Del Submundo
Rating: 5
Author: _Rico_

_Rico_Lv42yr

2022-03-29 20:13

Overall the story upto chapter 26 is simply great . The MC is calm and does not have rash personality. The story has great potential and i hope you complete it.

El Paraiso Perdido: La Venida Del Dios De La Muerte Del Submundo

EOA1

5.0

68 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies6

EOA1Author

Thanks for the review Wilson offers you a stone.

2yr

KurigohanLv5

Hello, i want ask, you have any plan to translate this too english?

EOA1:Thanks for the review Wilson offers you a stone.

2yr

EOA1Author

At the moment I don't have much free time, but once I finish writing the novel I plan to use the free time I spend writing to translate it.

Kurigohan:Hello, i want ask, you have any plan to translate this too english?

2yr

Time_walkerLv14

If you dont mind me asking How were able to read this I really want to read it but I dont know the language😭

2yr

EOA1Author

I personally only know Spanish, but I have come to read novels in other languages with relative comfort using the automatic translator that the Chrome browser brings, where you choose your main language and the browser usually translates any language into yours on most pages. I assume that readers who currently read the novel and do not know Spanish, which is my language, are doing that or something similar

Time_walker:If you dont mind me asking How were able to read this I really want to read it but I dont know the language😭

2yr

Time_walkerLv14

Thank you for your help I appreciate it

EOA1:I personally only know Spanish, but I have come to read novels in other languages with relative comfort using the automatic translator that the Chrome browser brings, where you choose your main language and the browser usually translates any language into yours on most pages. I assume that readers who currently read the novel and do not know Spanish, which is my language, are doing that or something similar

2yr

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