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Poisoned_Cyclone
Poisoned_CycloneLv131yr
2024-03-13 21:09

ok i have only read up to chapter 20 i really want to read more of it because the writing quality us good the plot is interesting with the sister and everyone in the real world forgetting the MC but for the life of me i can't the MC is just so trash i hate him so much he is just so narcicssistic, so self centered and just stupid in general Mr author man please tell me he gets better because i just can't force myself to read this without feeling immense thoughts of self harm.

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NecW
NecWAuthor

I'm sorry to hear that you feel this way, you're the first person to have such a concern. I will say that William's character does develop over time, but this is a long story and it doesn't happen in an instant. William's character was never designed to promote such thoughts, but if you feel this way then perhaps this book is not meant for you. If you'd like other great novels to read, I'd have to recommend Affinity: Chaos by Springs_Halo, Birth Of The Demonic Sword by EveOfChaos, and Versatile Mage translated by Chaos.

Mieszko_Chojnacki_3512
Mieszko_Chojnacki_3512Lv3

He does change, but if I remember correctly tgat was around 200 ch.

Estalucia
EstaluciaLv14

Author please tell me MC isn’t stuck in an actual digital game world and is actually the players who are projecting they’re souls to this world that actually exists somewhere in the universe.

NecW:I'm sorry to hear that you feel this way, you're the first person to have such a concern. I will say that William's character does develop over time, but this is a long story and it doesn't happen in an instant. William's character was never designed to promote such thoughts, but if you feel this way then perhaps this book is not meant for you. If you'd like other great novels to read, I'd have to recommend Affinity: Chaos by Springs_Halo, Birth Of The Demonic Sword by EveOfChaos, and Versatile Mage translated by Chaos.
NecW
NecWAuthor

I'm not a fan of that cliche

Estalucia:Author please tell me MC isn’t stuck in an actual digital game world and is actually the players who are projecting they’re souls to this world that actually exists somewhere in the universe.
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Estalucia
EstaluciaLv14

Wait I’m confused which one don’t you like the mc in a digital world or players souls being projected to another planet?

NecW:I'm not a fan of that cliche
Mister_SPO
Mister_SPOLv4

If u wanted to make a stupid Mc u should had made him a 12 years old he literally act like a man child

NecW:I'm sorry to hear that you feel this way, you're the first person to have such a concern. I will say that William's character does develop over time, but this is a long story and it doesn't happen in an instant. William's character was never designed to promote such thoughts, but if you feel this way then perhaps this book is not meant for you. If you'd like other great novels to read, I'd have to recommend Affinity: Chaos by Springs_Halo, Birth Of The Demonic Sword by EveOfChaos, and Versatile Mage translated by Chaos.
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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here .. [Spoiler Alert] First, I would like to explain this novel title, "Infinite Potential System," to avoid misunderstanding happened.. The word "infinite" is basically just the author ways to attract more readers.. The system uses "Potential Point" for MC to upgrade his system and increase his strength, element, talent, skill, and so on.. So, if you thought that MC had an infinite potential point from the start, then you are wrong.. MC struggles quite a lot to gain potential points.. This story is about cultivation, and MC is still not a cultivator after Ch50+.. The author seems to love delaying and dragging the MC cultivation as long as possible.. At first, MC can't cultivate because he is nobody: has no money, status, or backer.. When he has enough money, he buys one but unfortunately, he can't because he has no talent to cultivate.. He has to gamble to buy a random talent from the system until he gets cultivation talent.. And it takes quite a hardship for him finally gain one.. What worse? He has enemy EVERYWHERE.. He makes an enemy with anyone, either purposely or unintentionally.. Adventure group? Yes, he got punished by daily chores.. Alchemy? Yes, because he picked the herb in a wrong way and caused him to pay double for every potion he bought from them.. Guard? Yes, because he suspected to imitate array master.. He is an array master but because he is young, the guard just ignores and tries to worsen the situation.. Short story, MC is right, and guard or others is the wrong one, but MC is the one who gets punishment.. I hate to say this, but MC doesn't get justice here.. There are many familiar situations exactly like this in this novel, and MC keeps being blamed even though he just defends himself, but he has to take all the punishment.. The author makes MC kinda a guy who is afraid of the law or rules.. The author makes MC try to avoid being bad guys or merciless characters.. No matter how arrogant the higher up or the enforcement who misused their power, MC can't do anything about it.. These all will only annoy us.. The author seems love to give MC hardships, I guess.. One punishment after another.. It will keep coming guys.. MC also gained many elements, but he barely used them most of them.. Most MC elements are like a trophy, which he just tries to collect it to his arsenal but not use any of it.. The title kinda attracts me, but the storyline is not my cup of tea.. It is time to remove this novel from my webnovel library.. I give 3 stars because it is not good, but it is not that bad either.. It is considered as average..

Vancero
VanceroLv12

I'll be brief on the review, as there isn't much happening in the novel at the moment. It starts off pretty naturally with a unique way to isekai; it is amusing, and you'll know what I mean when you read it. I don't want to spoil it for you readers~. world background? not bad, not bad, the background isn't neglected, and updates as the MC finds out more about this world, which is good. I would hate it if the author just told us everything about the world before hand; that would be the same as spoiling the entire novel; it's better to be revealed at the end, as that is more exciting. Character design is also not bad but there are a few villains who "court death", so far what i've seen happen with villains in this novel is kinda generic but the mc isn't some psychopath that loves to murder people and than act like a saint, he is in-between, and i find that fact pretty engaging as most want to achieve that harmony but always ends up in a hypocritical mc, here he doesn't kill his villains instantly and pats himself on the back as if he did the world a favour like in most novels. At last round it up with writing quality and grammar, it's pretty good, but the fights need more detail, i'm not saying they are bad, but they could be better, also i hope his speed at improvement decreases a little since he's going way too fast, ik its the titles coming into play but the boost he got at the start is too big, should nerf him a little he is too op and might get arrogant ;-; {goodluck readers~}[img=exp][img=update]

Juwade
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