I'll be brief on the review, as there isn't much happening in the novel at the moment. It starts off pretty naturally with a unique way to isekai; it is amusing, and you'll know what I mean when you read it. I don't want to spoil it for you readers~. world background? not bad, not bad, the background isn't neglected, and updates as the MC finds out more about this world, which is good. I would hate it if the author just told us everything about the world before hand; that would be the same as spoiling the entire novel; it's better to be revealed at the end, as that is more exciting. Character design is also not bad but there are a few villains who "court death", so far what i've seen happen with villains in this novel is kinda generic but the mc isn't some psychopath that loves to murder people and than act like a saint, he is in-between, and i find that fact pretty engaging as most want to achieve that harmony but always ends up in a hypocritical mc, here he doesn't kill his villains instantly and pats himself on the back as if he did the world a favour like in most novels. At last round it up with writing quality and grammar, it's pretty good, but the fights need more detail, i'm not saying they are bad, but they could be better, also i hope his speed at improvement decreases a little since he's going way too fast, ik its the titles coming into play but the boost he got at the start is too big, should nerf him a little he is too op and might get arrogant ;-; {goodluck readers~}[img=exp][img=update]
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