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Item: Military System In Isekai Of Magic
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The_Great_Lazy_OneLv138mthThe_Great_Lazy_One

Author needs to do more research on military service, weapons, tactics and just everything. This story seems like he watched some 90's GI Joe kids cartoon and thought that was all the research he needed.

Military System In Isekai Of Magic

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invadertaylorLv14invadertaylor

I've noticed a lot of writers tend to do this. They think sprinkling in military items and terms will somehow season their story, but in truth it sounds sloppy.

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