Thanks author for another great chapter. My suggestions for the next game or games and the reasons below: 1. Star Citizen or Space Engineers so humanity starts getting used to star travel and space battles. 2. Diablo so humanity gets used to fighting demon like beings. 3. Starcraft because you put in Warcraft and I love both but Starcraft was my first RTS so big nostalgia for me.

Author needs to do more research on military service, weapons, tactics and just everything. This story seems like he watched some 90's GI Joe kids cartoon and thought that was all the research he needed.

Peggy carter isn't dead yet if you go by MCU timeline

You are correct, you aren't forcing me to read. I did say in my review that I dropped your stories didn't I? I like how you don't even address your copyright infringement because you have no defense to use as it's clear you are making a profit on someone else's IP. I dropped all your content and this will probably be the last interaction with you, hopefully you stop your crappy, scummy, thieving ways. BTW those other "cuck" authors were making more money than you by at least double at some points by NOT doing crappy things like patreon pay walls and negative responses to legit reviews and concerns.

Update review after dropping for a couple months. Giving 1 star due to all new chapters being patreon only. What you are doing is copyright infringement without it being in the gray area. You are charging people to read a story about the cyberpunk IP that you don't own. If you had made the chapters available ahead of time on patreon as appreciation of DONORS instead of literally locking them down unless you get paid for it you'd have a leg to stand on. Will be reporting your account to patreon and webnovel for copyright infringement for such scummy behavior. For all those that think I am salty because I don't want to spend money, I donate to other writers like Mr. Immortal and Nunuxd on patreon because they are what fanfic authors should be like and I want to encourage them instead of people like this author.

Don't bother reading only 25 chapters are available as the rest is behind patreon pay wall. Story was getting good too but author is a scumbag for pulling this crap.

Why is he calling the shapeshifter a demigorgan?

Story locked behind paywall, fanfictions that do this are scum. Report for copyright infringement due to the paywall. Author doesn't own any of the IP's but is still using it to make a profit. Before everyone starts talking sh*t about me, I would fully support authors if they wrote fanfictions and had a patreon for advance chapters or tips. I have supported ff authors like Cornbringer and MrImmortal and fully support their writings and practices by becoming a patreon sub. The minute this scum put that paywall up I lost all respect for him and his predatory practices and if he doesn't get called out like the others that do this it will start becoming the norm.

Welcome back!

Rewrite please, haven't found any like the gem your wrote.

Author probably dropped this story due to negative feedback on most recent chapters. Story was overall good until he started to shift the focus of the story to the son. Helios is kind of boring overall and we want the main plot to advance more instead of what feels like filler chapters with no substance. In my opinion he should not have done that, if anything he should continue the main story and make a different story be for Helios.

Would give higher rating if author put so many non chapters lately. 1 real chapter and then 5 non chapters... really? Bit of a dick move in my opinion.

IMHO if you are writing this story just because of the readers I think you should rethink why you are writing this story in the first place. It's great to be receive positive feedback but if you aren't doing this for yourself first and the readers second and get discouraged this easily then my opinion is that you should stop. I like your story and hope you continue it. Good luck and don't let the readers get you down or influence your story. They are reading your story after all and not their own.

Yeah, the story started out strong and really grabbed my attention in the first 10 chapters or so but after... Meh. It also doesn't help that like 5-10 chapters aren't chapters at all and are polls asking for future directions or other author notes, even though you could've added those to actually author notes at the bottom of chapters like everyone else does instead of padding your story with chapters to bring in readers. Dropping for now, will be back in like 2 months or so if author hasn't abandoned it by then.

I also agree, I personally don't really picture his outfits too much when reading. Remember when a author tries to cater to his critics too much the creativity of an author usually gets hampered and the story suffers.

Patreon only story, don't bother reading. Fanfic stories being behind a paywall is a scumbag move and should be called out on. Report for spam also.

Just wanted to let you know that you did a very scummy thing by placing your writing behind a paywall, and that you are now in copyright infringement zone and people can report you since you are now selling your stories that contain copyrighted characters that you don't own. Other FF writers offer advanced chapters to avoid legal issues as it can be seen as a hobby or artistic endeavors. Paywall is a transaction. BTW I reported you too. Cuz you are scum.

Don't bother reading, put the story behind a paywall. basically telling his fans and devoted readers all he wants is money. Hope you get hit with copyright infringement for pulling a douche move bruh. You shoulda went with the advance chapters on p*treon and put out a chapter or two a week instead of this.

Sounds like your holding your story hostage for money. Sorry, but I don't support writers that do that BS. Your story is a fanfic and not that great so don't expect people to donate. You should be writing and getting better instead of what you did.

The plot isn't good, the flow of the story is weird and disorienting, the characters are bland and the MC is strong and so effing weak at the same time. I have watched both shows and the shooter movie and yet there was nothing i liked from this.