Review Detail of Woshi in The Demonic Sect In Marvel

Not a whole fan of systems especially when a cultivation sect background is already established, being a sect leader should be enough. Honestly a lazy way of quantifying power levels. Grammar is alright. It's readable but there are a few areas where it uses the wrong tenses. A tip for writers who don't have english as their primary language (this is also helpful for primary english writers) Read your work out loud and ask yourself if it sounds right and if you don't know refer to other stories with decent grammar. Overall not for me.