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KliverJohn
KliverJohnLv42yr
2022-06-10 15:24

Honestly this novel not bad. Just dont apply too much logic while read. Some plot not exaggerated also not very too little (idk how to explain). If mc increasing his strength just take it pinch of salt dont think too much why that can happen and how it work.. Pretty fun to read for 40s chaps. Overall novel not so great just like other readers say. But for story i feel its ok to read. Ps : author too much when mc grandchild involve. Always to girl side.. Somehow i feel uncomfortable.. Lol

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