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Gojusensi_441Lv42yr
2022-06-05 16:58

concept is great but no connectivity when u are walking in q road the author would suddenly talk about how a guy is sitting in his home or that the mc has kids or grand kids and even try to add hot shots and other things here i don't get it ! this is pure bad doesn't have much fluidity it's worse than a newbie author this website always makes my expectations lower than what it was hats off

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