A good story decent characters but the translation is just god awful for an example one line is "A contracted beast can only have 5 contracted beasts"

the story has potential, but the bad translation/ Grammer/sentence structure puts me off immensely.

The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you        Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you           Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up)  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you                   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you          Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

Interesting Story, but the grammar and English is too broken to read. If the fixed the language and made it readable it would be a good read.

like the story but way to hard to read it poorly translated

it's a good story but unfortunately it's way to hard to read due to the poor translation

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Hello and an honest review from me. The story was good, minor grammar mistakes so that's great. The flow of the storyline in the first chapter is simple without any twist or turn. Other than that, keep up the good work author 👍🏻

Interesting i Will Comeback to reading this again. can't wait the next chapter...... .

interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. im so excited with this book. this book is literally good and very easy to understand, can't wait to continue reading this book