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Cuteness_preacher9
Cuteness_preacher9Lv142yr
2022-07-23 16:21

A good story decent characters but the translation is just god awful for an example one line is "A contracted beast can only have 5 contracted beasts"

Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)

Fallen_Angelss
4.6
183 Chs

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Fallen_Angelss
Fallen_AngelssAuthor

I apologize because this is my first novel in English, and English is not the main language in my country. I will try to improve even better.

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Blood_Thorn4505
Blood_Thorn4505Lv10

the story has potential, but the bad translation/ Grammer/sentence structure puts me off immensely.

2yr

_Rel_
_Rel_Lv15

The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you        Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you           Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up)  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you                   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you          Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

2yr
cass262
cass262Lv13

Interesting Story, but the grammar and English is too broken to read. If the fixed the language and made it readable it would be a good read.

3yr
omega_emrald
omega_emraldLv15

like the story but way to hard to read it poorly translated

2yr
N_0038
N_0038Lv15

it's a good story but unfortunately it's way to hard to read due to the poor translation

2yr
WarrantyW
WarrantyWLv4

Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

Hello and an honest review from me. The story was good, minor grammar mistakes so that's great. The flow of the storyline in the first chapter is simple without any twist or turn. Other than that, keep up the good work author 👍🏻

2yr
Kim_Jongjoj
Kim_JongjojLv1

Interesting i Will Comeback to reading this again. can't wait the next chapter...... .

3yr
udinpeter
udinpeterLv1

interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. im so excited with this book. this book is literally good and very easy to understand, can't wait to continue reading this book

3yr
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