Review Detail of CallmeCyrus0409 in HP: What would you do if you were Snape in his time at Hogwarts?

Writing quality three stars, no noticeable misspellings or grammar mistakes, pretty low rating because of so much info dumping and repeatative use of sentences already written in a chapter to other chapters. Story development five stars, good plot with a bit of originality. three star character design, you don't own/created the characters but just borrowing. five star updating stability, pretty stable release of chapters. world background three stars, you Dont own Harry Potter.