This would absolutely destroy a poor virgin...it might end in murder.

*Corporeal Patronus

I thought that only Narcissa knew about his second Lordship? Why would he suddenly tell Lily of all people?! She is dating his enemy for Merlin's sake.

It might be irrelevant but...just think about what Tom Riddle will think about this. He has probably never had anyone under him as efficient as Narcissa. Just sent the order out yesterday to get close to him and they start dating the next day! That's impressive!

I agree that MOST of the time it would be extremely creepy to do that, but we are talking about 2 Slytherins here. Severus is playing on the fact that HE knows, that Narcissa knows, that SHE is a bombshell and she is proud of it. He is basically throwing her pride as an 'Ice Queen' and beauty right back in her face and mocking her for it. It somewhat works in this instance, given the self and family pride and arrogance of such a girl like Narcissa. To some random girl though, it would definitely be creepy and would most probably get you slapped.

Thank god! I was sweating bullets over here, hoping that wouldn't happen like it almost ALWAYS does.

I believe it is most popularly called a Phylactery.

*This one was more deadly and dangerous.*

So the author has dropped this story already but I am still posting a review just for my own sake so that I won't reread it again. Writing Quality gets 2 stars because the translation has several errors and most importantly the author drags out EVERYTHING and makes a single conversation, letter, or inner monologue take like 5 chapters for no apparent reason. In fact, the inner monologue of the MC at the very beginning of the story takes like 4 chapters of repeating himself over and over before he does ANYTHING. Stability of Updates is 1 star since it was dropped. Story Development is 2 stars because it is horrendously SLOW due to the constant repeating thoughts and dialogue. Also, the story is taken up mostly by a completely OC environment at Salem Witches Institute that is basically just there to raise the MC's prestige in Potions and give him more OC love interests. Character Design is 2 stars because after Snape's soul merges with the Benedict guy he becomes an idiot who is constantly making mistakes that the original wouldn't have made, not to mention he is a simp/beta for literally any girl he talks to. World Background is 3 stars since MOST of it is correct, bar a few important errors. Unfortunately, the world mostly expands into the OC world of SWI so it is kind of boring IMO. Overall, I give it 2 stars and frankly don't recommend anyone reading this unless you are very good at skimming and picking out key points in massive walls of text. The writing style is such that even after picking out the key points, you will find the next 4 walls of text have the SAME key points and thus keep having to skip more and more of the story, losing details along the way. It is mind numbing and almost impossible to experience immersion while reading. The idea isn't bad at all, it is merely poorly executed.

Why is he so dumb after the merger? There is no way the original Snape would have made all these stupid mistakes in these conversations.

Should be *SCoF (the school of flying)* according to the other ones.

OCs...OCs Everywhere.

*Knuts

*Galleons

*goblin

Why had MC become a pushover all of a sudden? Is he simping for Lily AND Hermione? Wait...he was awfully nice to Narcissa too. Will he just be a total beta?

No, it is Snape speaking that sentence, not Hermione. *But I better* is already correct there. The entire paragraph needs work really but the specific part you pointed out isn't wrong to begin with.