Review Detail of carrotpie in HP: What would you do if you were Snape in his time at Hogwarts?

The story is good but the main thing ruining the story is that the author is constantly and I mean at every single sentence and paragraph saying the exact same thing 3-4 times repeatedly. It’s getting really annoying and I’m having to skip around half of the paragraph to read since it’s just a repeat of the thing it said before but worded slightly diffrently .