My only problem with the ff is that the author drags parts of the of the story on to the point of repeating himself over and over again. I understand if you need filler but if you make the story feel so monotonous, it doest feel like a well read book. It happens so often I started skipping the endings of paragraphs or if I saw skimmed ahead a little and saw that it was also I repeat I just flat out skipped the paragraph. To put simply, until the ff isn't a monotonous repeat of itself I won't advise people to read it unless your into that type of stuff. Lastly the conversations could use a little work, again it feels as if everyone is a robot.

Fanfic very good story. I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story.[img=recommend]

The story is good but the main thing ruining the story is that the author is constantly and I mean at every single sentence and paragraph saying the exact same thing 3-4 times repeatedly. It’s getting really annoying and I’m having to skip around half of the paragraph to read since it’s just a repeat of the thing it said before but worded slightly diffrently .

I have seen way worse ffs with far better ratings! so you get 5 stars. I think this FF has a lot of potential and I really want to see it continued. I like how Snape still cares for the people and what has happened between them in the past. It makes it feel like we’re still reading about a Severus who had a second life, rather than a Severus who was just replaced and doesn’t care. He has a lot of different relationships and his story is a tragic one and that makes it interesting. Though I get what some people are saying. Try to convey his feelings through actions more than repeating it with his inner monologue in the future... I hope the Summer Arc isn’t too long, I want to see Snape back in Hogwarts cuz I think the interaction with him and the marauders was your best chapter so far. Keep writing!

The fanfic is really GREAT, i loved the drama, the way that Severus is realizing that he himself is his worst enemy. Because has so much potential but he let waist because of his hatred (even i don't blame him because if i was him, i would just ask for transfer to another school very far away from gryffindor, lily, dumbledore and death eaters to live a quiet and happy life and never return to england, wich would be ease with Snape intelligence)

this fanfiction is really awesome. the first 2/3 chapters are a bit drama queen but after that the story really begins. the story is very original for a "what if Severus Snape at Hogwarts" like other fanfiction. I have enormous hope for this story which exploits things that are little studied. I recommend this story to everyone

Your fan fiction is amazing and a masterpiece. The start is quite difficult to read and Snape is like 10 chapters obsessed with Lilly. (4.4 Stars)

the beginning is very good but I do not advise reading this fanfiction to people who do not like the tragedy or suffering of the characters and so everything is cool ..................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

What can i say it is a masterpiece. The character development and magical world exploration is beyond amazing. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆